I-Search Blog Post (Revisions)

After I had a peer read my paper, one of the revisions I made was that I used a lot of acronyms such as "iep" and "vaap", and I was not thinking that not everyone in the class may know what those stand for, so that I should put that in the paper also.  Also, I felt after reading the rough draft I needed to add more of my personal opinion and feelings/thoughts into the paper, so that it was not so bland.  The last thing I really revised, was my interview section.  I needed to add where we interviewed, more on my persons background and knowledge of the subject, and add more quotes.